Sunday, December 03, 2006

下午詩


我上個禮拜在台北101觀光.出們就看到那裡的很美的藝術水泉.一個警惕在那裡站著看著水跳.我看到他的臉色--他好橡在百日夢,看著地面.他的臉色看起來很難過.他有什麼風波? 他作天跟他的太太吵架嗎?他的老闆又罵他嗎?

我覺得每天每個人都在心裡面有一首詩.你今天的關於什麼?

7 comments:

Unknown said...

這個禮拜我到台北101玩。
出了大門,
看到一座美麗的藝術水泉。
我,站在那裡看著水舞,看著它的臉色。(用臉色怪怪的)
它像做著白日夢,看著地面;
臉色沈重,是有什麼風波嗎?
昨天跟太太吵架?
還是又被老闆罵?

我覺得每個人每天心中都有一首詩,你今天的詩是什麼?

Unknown said...

Ron!!
挖 你很厲害耶~~
一下子中文都這麼強了
還可以寫詩!!
你的詩寫的不錯 很有意境~~
hehehhe..
我現在在Western啦~
還有三個禮拜學校就要結束了
ㄟ 我今年冬天要回台灣歐!!
到時候我們可以聯絡一下!! :D

Unknown said...

HEY RON!! I see that you're getting sooo good at writing in Chienese. It's so impressive. I wish I could comment on your blog in Chinese, but I don't have the IME installed on this computer yet so as of now I'll just have to stick with English. I miss you very much so let me know when you get back to we can have dinner and talk about Taiwanese entertainment gossips!! -Noel

gene said...
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gene said...

上禮拜我到台北一零一玩。
從大門出來後,便看到一座美麗的藝術噴泉,
還有一個警察在那裡對著水站著。
他的頭低低的,看著地面,好像在做白日夢。
表情似乎有點難過。

他遇到了什麼事?
是昨天跟太太吵架了?
還是又挨了老闆罵?

我覺得每個人每天都在心裡寫下一首詩。
你今天寫的是什麼詩呢?

Anonymous said...

璟嘉(jin-jia) is gene.
and the deleted comment is from gene, too. Because there was a grammer mistake in it (again).

i appreciate your blog very much.
keep on good work!

Unknown said...

哈哈哈
有盲點呢
人類的意識與詮釋真是有趣
多一些人來「創作」
很好玩喔